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Thursday, April 23, 2020

Fanboys...

3 comments:

  1. Archie, I really enjoyed your story,the boy with special powers reminds be a bit of peter pan and the lost boys.The boy must have been very brave to live in the forest with those goblins not far away.Does he live under the tree or up in the tree with the leaves? Please tell me more, this is great.-Leanne

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  2. Great story Archie! I liked how you described how the dark forest and how it looked scary. Like Leanne this creates a picture in my mind and has reminded me of another book "The Enchanged Wood" written by Enid Blyton (it is one of my favourite stories).

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  3. archie by the way what is fanboys?

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